For example - (this is a little part of my story).
You are on a dangerous quest to locate the Sword of Dawn. It is known to be located in an ancient japanese temple.
Intro:
It was a full moon tonight, as Mia paced along the cobblestone streets of Gisborne. Blue light guided her on a quest to find the sword of dawn. It was known to be located in a secret Japanese temple. Suddenly, she stumbled, and tummy lurching hurtled down a shadowy tunnel. But wait, what’s that, a ladder hanging down the stony walls.
Should Mia grab onto the ladder and climb towards a blinding light?
Or
Should she continue falling and see where the dark tunnel takes her?
In pick a path you choose a path and some choices may result in death, or if you're lucky completing the quest and finding the Sword of Dawn. We will be putting the pick a path on a google form so that when you press an answer you will go onto another page with your next choices.
Hi Kya,
ReplyDeleteYour Writing hooked me in, I wanted to read more. Maybe next time you can add a more about what you learnt. This reminds me of Bear grylls (You vs Wild). Are you enjoying making an adventure?
Poppy
Hi Kya,
ReplyDeleteI like how you included part of your pick a path. It sounds fun to make and share. This blog post reminds me of when I went to Bali and we visited lots of temples. Have you ever been in a temple before? Next time you could add a little bit more information about what you had to do to make it.
From Sarah
Hi Kya,
ReplyDeleteI like how you added your intro and photo of a Japanese temple. It sounds like it was really fun to do. Are you finished doing your story yet? You could say if you like doing it. I really enjoyed reading your blogpost. Overall it was a great blog post.