This blog has been archived, no further content will be uploaded or added. You are welcome to continue viewing posts, however commenting has been disabled.
Showing posts with label Quick Write. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Quick Write. Show all posts
Monday, 13 August 2018
Thursday, 26 July 2018
Day at the beach
Quick Write
By Kya Solomon
Her soft brown fur buffeted in the wind…
She tilted her head and her sky blue eyes glistened in the bright
sun.
My dog stood radiantly making vague patterns in the sand.
Waves crashed, booming loudly against the sharp rocks.
Grains of sand made her fur shine in the lit up atmosphere.
I tapped down the wooden stairs making my footsteps as quiet
as an owl. Her petite paws dug into the sand like the smallest
russian doll. She hauled herself out of the water as heavy as a
200 pound weight. She bolted along the sand faster than her fur.
I wondered if I would ever catch her! The aroma of fresh
salt and saplings filled the air. Plants scraped roughly
against my skin as I raced my dog towards the stream.
Another beautiful day at the beach!
Friday, 22 June 2018
Speedy, Spectacular, Quick Writes
In Moana pretty much every day we have to do a Quick Write, which is when our teacher gives us a sentence starter (which is highlighted in yellow below) and we have to write a short story beginning with that sentence starter. Here is my story:
Water swirled around my feet as I stood, my feet sinking into the golden sand. The tides continue to wash in and out. I stand there and gaze out at the horizon. Out there waves are crashing loudly, but where i'm standing the ocean is as calm as the bright blue sky up above.
I trudge up the glistening sand and place my towel up on a nice dry spot. The sun starts to rise and the sky turns pink. The calm ocean numbs my toes as I bravely dive into the deep blue liquid. I feel my hair sweep behind me, and the water rush down my neck, through my arms, down my stomach and my legs, then tickle the tips of my toes. An icy blast of air whips my neck as I slowly arise out of the water. I race to shore, grab my towel and quickly run home. I wash the sand that covers my small feet off under the hose. Then I jump into the warm bath that speedily warms my limbs. What a great lifestyle!
Water swirled around my feet as I stood, my feet sinking into the golden sand. The tides continue to wash in and out. I stand there and gaze out at the horizon. Out there waves are crashing loudly, but where i'm standing the ocean is as calm as the bright blue sky up above.
I trudge up the glistening sand and place my towel up on a nice dry spot. The sun starts to rise and the sky turns pink. The calm ocean numbs my toes as I bravely dive into the deep blue liquid. I feel my hair sweep behind me, and the water rush down my neck, through my arms, down my stomach and my legs, then tickle the tips of my toes. An icy blast of air whips my neck as I slowly arise out of the water. I race to shore, grab my towel and quickly run home. I wash the sand that covers my small feet off under the hose. Then I jump into the warm bath that speedily warms my limbs. What a great lifestyle!
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)