Monday, 20 May 2019

Escape Kraznir

Since late last term the level 4 writers have been writing a narrative, fantasy story called Escape Kraznir. Koka Ngaire slowly unlocked new chapter guidelines and we had to follow those and write a story. (We are still going!) I am really enjoying this writing and can't wait to finally have it completed and read the finished product. I enjoy this style of writing because you can use heaps of imagination and lots of cool vocab. Below is the introduction to our writing:

There are two countries separated by a river: Kraznir and Slinsil.  The people of Kraznir are fierce and warlike. Their land is poor and little will grow there.  Their king is called Krill and he lives in a castle in the mountains. To the south of Kraznir is Slinsil.  It is a rich and beautiful country, whose people love peace.
Rumours have reached Slinsil that Krill is planning to send an army to attack them.  They hurriedly prepare to defend themselves. They send a team of spies to Kraznir to find out about Krill’s plans.  They want to know when and where he intends to attack. The spies are successful. Deep in the cellars of Castle Krill they find the complete battle plan.  This, and many other valuable documents, is stored in a large wooden chest. Now the spies have got to get the chest and all its content safely back to Slinsil.
You are the leader of the spies.

Here is the link to My Story

1 comment:

  1. Hi Kya,
    I really enjoyed reading you story and you had lots of detail and good adjectives. Maybe next time make it that people with the link can VIEW and not edit because if they can edit it means that anyone who is on your blog can mess around with your story. And I know you wouldn't want people to do that.
    -Hunter

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments:
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let me know that you have read, watched or listened to my blog
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.