Thursday, 14 June 2018

MESSY ROOM!!!

In Moana we have been continuing to write phenomenal storybird poems. This is my Messy Room poem!

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  1. Great poem Kya!

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  5. Hi I LOVE that poem how do you survive with such a messy room,I know I could not
    Rose

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  6. Bonjour,
    Was this poem dedicated to me? You know my room isn't as messy as that. I love all your poems-keep writing them and posting.
    Zoe

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